On Thu, Dec 10, 2009 at 12:07:49PM -0800, merlin corey wrote:

> On Wed, Dec 9, 2009 at 9:26 PM, Igor Sysoev <igor@sysoev.ru> wrote:
> > On Thu, Dec 10, 2009 at 09:54:35AM +0700, Edho P Arief wrote:
> >
> >> On Thu, Dec 10, 2009 at 2:22 AM, Igor Sysoev <igor@sysoev.ru> wrote:
> >> > Please send me feedback privately about my English language/style errors.
> >> > I DO need it.
> >> >
> >> >
>
> > --
> > Igor Sysoev
> > http://sysoev.ru/en/
> >
>
> Great work these docs are really good! It will help with helping
> people on the IRC quite a bit, I think, because it makes many things
> very clear. Certainly, I found the server names hash bucket tuning to
> be instructive (I see it all the time in people's configurations
> probably because it's on some blog and I am pretty sure they are
> setting it to weird retarded values D:).
>
> I have just one English correction:

Just one, because Brian Mercer has already fixed a lot of them :)

> http://nginx.org/en/docs/http/request_processing.html
> -e 's/Now let’s look how nginx chooses a/Now let’s look at how nginx chooses a/'
>
> Though I did see some places where traditionally there might be an
> article (a an the) and maybe some weird placement of commas... I
> don't think it affects the readability. If you really like I will go
> through it again some night and give you a list of such places.

OK, here are XML sources:
http://nginx.org/tmp/


--
Igor Sysoev
http://sysoev.ru/en/

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